Chapter 68: Don’t! Don’t go see him!

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“Eh, that’s more or less what happened.”

“…… Well, I understand, I didn’t really think about it that way, but I’m really happy that you took the initiative to come and talk to me about it, Natsuki ……”

On Saturday afternoon, Aoi Natsuki took the initiative to dial a phone number to Hayakawa, and then explained what he had been doing with Ayano these days, although he didn’t think that the other party would misunderstand it, but by taking the initiative to inform about it himself, he was able to avoid the risk of the consequences of this matter.

Natsuki Aoi always feels that she is living in a tangible real world and can’t be treated as a mere love game world, you have to have your own subjective sense as well as not to carry too much purpose.

Helping Ayano because he felt the other person was a friend was an event that probably wouldn’t have played a single role in the overall relationship, but the premise said that this was an actual real world, and that a submissive choice would’ve been nice.

It may not necessarily be necessary to make some purposeful choices in order to make the goodwill increase, then there will also be a certain probability of counterproductive, about this point, he has been difficult to increase the value of the goodwill in the beginning, repeatedly bumping into the wall, and there is also a large degree of this reason.

“Well, it’s good that you understand, by the way, the bag of potatoes that was delivered to your house the other day, has your family burned them for dinner since then? How did your family rate it?”

“That one, it’s really delicious! My dad super loved it and asked me where I bought it and wanted to buy some more to stock up at home.”

At this moment, Hayakawa Keiko was standing next to the shoe cabinet in the corridor, her left hand index finger and middle finger showed the posture of a person walking unconsciously and slowly moving forward, her right hand was holding and listening to the phone, the whole person was in a very happy state, and her body was unconsciously twisting to the left and to the right.

Hayakawa’s younger brother, Koizumi, also came down from the second floor, thinking to check the refrigerator to see if there was any food left, and then he saw his sister’s marvelous state at the bottom.

His left and right feet were crossed, his waist was leaning against the shoebox, and his voice was very low, and his manner was extraordinarily polite.

Yay ……

The first thing Koizumi guessed was that her sister was calling a boy, but it was a novelty, she had never seen her sister look like this before, not to mention, it was quite interesting to watch.

I had to tell Mom and Dad about this myself for dinner tonight!

Koizumi made up his mind inwardly.

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“Then please teach me more today as well!”

“Good.”

Aoi Natsuki received the original artwork sent by Takahashi Ayano and looked at it carefully.

Lina, on the other hand, sat down in a nearby chair, her eyes wide open as she looked at the computer screen.

Not making a single sound, not interfering with Natsuki’s work.

After reading it, Aoi Natsuki nodded, “This time it’s a lot better than before, drawing manga is really the most important thing, first of all the manga artist himself can’t set limitations for himself before he can do it.”

The reason why Japan is able to anime industry blossomed, mainly all kinds of subjects and no strict limits, scale of content will only make your audience different, cast the direction of the publishers are different, but will not carry out a large part of a cut.

“Well, thanks to you, I couldn’t figure out a lot of things before, and I didn’t talk to my other manga artist friends, but Natsuki’s advice really helped me a lot, and now I suddenly feel like I can do it again!”

The video shows Ayano Takahashi majestically, with purple hair tied back in a ponytail and black-rimmed glasses, and she does have the aura of a female manga artist.

This time the short is much tighter in storytelling as well as laughs, and the viewing is much better.

Natsuki Aoi’s philosophy is correct; funny titles are forever newcomer gems and the first productivity of manga, and most of the ones that sell well around them are the more fun characters.

“Then I’ll take this short story and submit it!” Ayano Takahashi said on the other end of the video.

“Wait a minute!” Aoi Natsuki hurriedly called a halt, followed by turning on the function of computer screen sharing, opening the drawing tool, and said, “Now it’s true that your story is more interesting than before, but there’s another very fatal shortcoming, and that’s the persona, even though you’ve differentiated the three girls with your excellent drawing skills, but in reality, when they don’t appear in the picture, some of the spiels just don’t know who’s talking, and the whole thing just looks very cluttered.”

Takahashi Ayano listened quietly, and operated herself to look at her drawing once again.

It sure seems like it ……

“Ayano, the persona point you instead had more distinct characters on the initial draft you showed me, it’s an otherworldly adventure after all, you may have copied some of the hot-blooded hero’s character, at least then the persona came out, but this time around you’re drawing a campus fanfic, where the characters are spitting on each other for the sake of spitting on each other, and that’s where you lose the uniqueness of each character. “

Aoi Natsuki watched Ayano fall silent and start to think, and continued, “Don’t throw away all of your past, some of them are great strengths that you need to keep, character uniqueness references, think of the three girls in Everyday, or the Manzaiya trio in Silver Soul, creating a persona is definitely a very important part of the story, and it’s the second most important thing after the the most important thing in terms of story themes.”

“Oh! I understand when you say that …… You’re right! I’ll change it properly!” Takahashi Ayano suddenly raised her head and said with a solemn face.

With comics she’s serious.

Aoi Natsuki saw her listen to the advice, and did not refute or quarrel, but accepted it with an open mind, this is really with her sister is completely different from the sky ah, obviously a mother’s womb out, why is the gap so big?

“Natsuki.”

Ayano suddenly called out to him.

“Huh? What’s wrong?”

“Not much, it’s just that I feel like we’re in this state right now as if we’re the two main characters in Bakumanga King, and it’s quite interesting when I think about it.” Ayano said with a smile.

Aoi Natsuki grinned back as she remembered the fanfic, it was quite similar.

Bakuman King, also known as Dream Eater, is the story of two high school boys who draw comics together and want to become professional cartoonists. One of the two is excellent at drawing, the other is excellent at plot control, and the conclusion of one plus one is greater than two, which ultimately leads to a constant sprint to the top of the mountain.

“Today, thank you so much.”

Ayano Takahashi slowly put away her smile and bowed deeply at him, which showed her respect.

Knowing that this was not the time to refuse, Aoi Natsuki turned and bowed to her as well, “Good work.”

This concludes the two men’s comic exploration for the day.

Hmmm ……

It’s nice to have a chat like this once in a while.

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Downstairs.

Takahashi Mito was still watching TV as her sister Ayano came down from the second floor step by step, looking in a good mood.

Walk over to the doorway shoe closet and start changing your shoes.

“I’m going out.”

“Hmm? Are you going to volunteer again?”

“Saa……” Takahashi Ayano changed her shoes, her tone slowly becoming low, her eyes slowly lifting, “Maybe it’s to meet Aoi Natsuki oh~”

As soon as the words fell, the whole person was like a bow and arrow that sped out, and the next second Takahashi Mito, who hadn’t reacted yet, only heard the sound of a heavy door slamming.

Eh?

Takahashi Mito’s brain was on the fritz for a second, and he quickly reacted.

Plummer’s second goal!

This time she kicked the slippers under the sofa directly and rushed to the door extremely quickly!

Don’t!

Don’t go!

Don’t go see Natsuki Aoi!